Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Sunday, 27 September 2015

Sacred Writing Time

This year I have been starting off every class with Sacred Writing Time- 10 minutes for the students to write in their notebooks about anything they choose.
  • We began by talking about exercise and practice and how this helps us to develop our skills in certain areas- we know this is true of writing as well.
  • We went over the guidelines for this time: 
  1. This is a time to write, not doodle or stare into space- we need to have an idea and a plan before coming to class (for those who are stuck for a topic, a visual or prompt is provided every day).
  2. We need to vary our writing. To do this, we make short-term goals and evaluate then frequently and set new goals. We want to grow as writers so we need to take risks and try new strategies in our writing.
  3. We are engaged in our writing, therefore, we do not talk to others. This is precious, sacred time so we use it wisely.
  4. We will share at the end of the 10 minutes, either with a partner, table group, or whole group. We will be putting examples on our blogs and sharing them with our parents in future.
All About SWT- Sacred Writing Time in grade 6:

We write for 10 minutes at the beginning of each class:
Our rationale/why we do this:

Sacred Writing Time builds writing fluency skills. Producing a page of interesting thoughts in 10 minutes is a goal.
Sacred Writing Time challenges us to be creative. We learn to present our ideas in unique formats.
Sacred Writing Time is when we practice new writing skills from our mini-lessons.

Students reflected on this special part of our class. Here are some of their observations:
Sacred Writing Time is….

interesting
fun
free writing
creative
a little difficult
challenging
exciting
quiet time to think and write
awesome
my favourite time
too short!
self-reflection
amazing
time to write my memories
Sacred Writing will help us….

to brainstorm ideas for other writing projects.
remember special events this year.
to improve our writing skills.
to build our vocabulary
to try out new ways of writing without worrying.
to tell our stories.
to compare our writing from the beginning of the year to the end.
focus on different writing skills when we set goals for ourselves.
Here are a few example pages from students as well as some reflections they wrote (on their blogs) about this activity:

From a student learning English:

・I have written 7 different stories in Sacred Writing Time.
・I have improved my writing during Sacred Writing Time in these three ways:

・Think and write
・How can I grab readers pay attention
・ Strategy (Start→middle→end)

・One way I can improve my writing skills during Sacred Writing Time is:
Write more faster, and early decision to what will i write about. And always challenge harder, use difficult word and challenge to yourself.

From another student:

I have written 11 different stories in Sacred Writing Time.

I have improved my writing during Sacred Writing Time in these three ways: showing emotions, spelling and connecting the sentences smoothly.

One way I can improve my writing skills during Sacred Writing Time is to increase the amount of writing and to use alliteration or onomatopoeia to make my writing even more vivid.
Student Page Samples:














Monday, 3 November 2014

Memoir Rubric for Self-Assessment

This year students wrote memoirs as their personal narrative for our first writing unit in language arts. We spent a considerable amount of time on mini-lessons that addressed the following:
*generating story ideas
*characteristics of memoirs
*hooking the reader with a good lead
*zooming in on the main event
*showing not telling using the senses
*satisfying conclusions
*revision and editing skills

During the process, the students periodically self-assessed and set goals for the continuation of their memoirs. As a final assessment, they were asked to self-assess using the following rubric. The rubric begins with a grade 4 level to the left and works towards a grade 7 level of writing proficiency. This rubric was adapted from materials from TCRWP (Teacher's College Reading and Writing Project). The original rubric is about 4 pages long; however, we knew that this would overwhelm our student population in which many of them are ELL's. So, we adapted this rubric to make it more manageable.

For many years now I have believed strongly that students should always assess their work before the teacher does so. It is imperative that they can reflect on what they have written and identify on a rubric what they have achieved and where they need to focus their attention for future work. In my experience, very few students are unable to assess their writing. Some students do have inflated ideas of where their writing is on a rubric and some are way too hard on themselves. But, for the most part, they are usually right on the mark and I often agree with their assessments of themselves.

We also added reflection questions for the students at the end of the rubric. This is often the section that I enjoy reading the most and which gives me the best insight into what the student is like as a writer. I am regularly amazed by some of the thoughtful responses to these questions by my students as they are able to tell me what went well, what they struggled with, and what they would remember for the next time. This set of reflection questions also included which mini-lesson they found most helpful- a great way for me to judge which ones were effective and to work on strengthening my practice.

Here is the rubric.

Here is an example of a student's thoughtful reflection on her writing:

Reflection: Answer the following in complete sentences with details.

1. What was the purpose of writing a memoir?
I think that the purpose of writing a memoir was to challenge ourselves by changing settings (flash back) and then reflect on a certain moment.

2. What was the easiest part about this assignment?
The easiest part of writing the story was to get the ideas and put them all down.

3. What was the hardest part about this assignment?
The hardest part was to describe my feelings and the story to make the reader really understand and feel what I feel.

4. What mini-lesson helped you the most?
I think the mini lesson that helped me the most was the best times last times one because it’s how I got the idea of how to make a good and powerful story about my cousin.

5. Which parts of this assignment helped you to develop your skills as a writer?
The ending part, it helped me understand that the best ending aren’t the ones that are the longest and have the most complicated words. Infact an ending can be short, simple, and very powerful.